Feedback from Nick Bax:
I presented my presentation for my festival idea to a head of ...., Nick Bax. He gave me some feedback that I will use when designing my final products to help them look as professional as possible. The feedback he gave me was:
I presented my presentation for my festival idea to a head of ...., Nick Bax. He gave me some feedback that I will use when designing my final products to help them look as professional as possible. The feedback he gave me was:
- Try to make the location obvious, as it could be seen as an
American festival.
- Use British flags maybe on the ticket and logo?
- Well presented.
Feedback from peers:
I conducted a questionnaire for some of my peers to answer regarding the presentation that I presented about my festival idea and its products. The results that I have obtained will help me alter my designs to make them appeal to the target audience. I will restrict the names on the back of the t-shirt to a maximum of three so the text is not too overcrowded. I will also keep the colour scheme the same but add a slogan so that people reading the poster for the festival know that it is American artists that are coming to Sheffield.
- Well presented.
Feedback from peers:
I conducted a questionnaire for some of my peers to answer regarding the presentation that I presented about my festival idea and its products. The results that I have obtained will help me alter my designs to make them appeal to the target audience. I will restrict the names on the back of the t-shirt to a maximum of three so the text is not too overcrowded. I will also keep the colour scheme the same but add a slogan so that people reading the poster for the festival know that it is American artists that are coming to Sheffield.
